Very good, keeps the audience engaged throughout. The camerawork looked very professional. Story is easy to follow however we feel that the ending seemed a bit sudden.
After the note reading the short film feels more like a trailer, this could be due to the music, the sudden ending and the title screen being at the end.
The story line was really good and the narrative fitted well. The music tended to fit together with the action in moments on the hill. The title was effective and when the actors walked to the door and it faded away. The techniques used for editing were really good too.
Although, it's not clear what the message is and it didn't feel like a short film, just the opening of something yet to come. Some of the conversations don't reflect on how a conversation takes place i.e when talking about searching for the Dad. The gaps were long.
-interesting and relatable storyline for the demographic -the parallel shots between characters were very effective and also built up the tension -eyecatching settings -the dialogue sound was very clear and edited well -keeps the audience guessing being left on a cliff hanger -very emotional subject and can effect people in different ways -
-Good shot variety.
ReplyDelete-Great body language to suggest meaning.
-Use of different filming techniques.
-Variety of shot sizes.
-Close up to show emotion.
Very good, keeps the audience engaged throughout. The camerawork looked very professional. Story is easy to follow however we feel that the ending seemed a bit sudden.
ReplyDeleteAfter the note reading the short film feels more like a trailer, this could be due to the music, the sudden ending and the title screen being at the end.
The story line was really good and the narrative fitted well. The music tended to fit together with the action in moments on the hill. The title was effective and when the actors walked to the door and it faded away. The techniques used for editing were really good too.
ReplyDeleteAlthough, it's not clear what the message is and it didn't feel like a short film, just the opening of something yet to come. Some of the conversations don't reflect on how a conversation takes place i.e when talking about searching for the Dad. The gaps were long.
-interesting and relatable storyline for the demographic
ReplyDelete-the parallel shots between characters were very effective and also built up the tension
-eyecatching settings
-the dialogue sound was very clear and edited well
-keeps the audience guessing being left on a cliff hanger
-very emotional subject and can effect people in different ways
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